Beautiful Classic Haiku :)
Ah, this is beautifully written.
Thanks Shweta for your read.
@Reading Pleasure! Thanks you so much for such beautiful words
Yes but sadly it is the reality.Nature has created them for ground and we have brought them in pots. "I"ness always overshadows "One"ness
Oh yes, potted prison. Put it in the ground and let it dance free. Love your haiku.
I enjoy potted plants and have never considered that they may be prisoners. But I think you are right!
"Dancing lillies".. it doesn't get much better. Lovely poem! Hug from Holland!
Hmm ~ well penned ~ not sure I agree about the 'imprisoned' ~ do get your meaning Happy Creating ~ ^_^
@J C, Thanks for your read and being absorbed with the meaning. I am humbled.
@gma, Actually I conceived this looking after my plotted plants. I assumed what they would have said to me had they have been able to speak our language. And than I assumed what they are saying to me in their language :)Thanks for your read and motivation.
@Marit, I am humbled.
@Carol, Thanks for your read and such valuable comment.Just another take, I feel I am imprisoned in my body with the laws of society and lands :)
purest beauty.thank you for the inspiration, so glad you are here sharing your haiku!
Rebecca, It feels highly motivating with such good words.Thanks for appreciation.
A growth imprisoned..ah, I was perhaps among such people.. for years stayed stuck happy with such growth..RS
Ah Ramesh, I could understand. In fact most of us do remain more with external world than internal. Thanks for your read.
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