Friday, September 9, 2016

Growth - A Haiku

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Soothing air, pretty clouds
And dancing lily in the pot
growth Imprisoned!

Utpal Kant Mishra
Mumbai
Sep.9, 2016  

P.S.: Linking this write to "haiku my heart at recuerda mi corazon " and also to #MyFriendAlexa @BlogChatter #BlogChatter

18 comments:

Shweta Dave said...

Beautiful Classic Haiku :)

Reading Pleasure said...

Ah, this is beautifully written.

Utpal said...

Thanks Shweta for your read.

Utpal said...

@Reading Pleasure! Thanks you so much for such beautiful words

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Imprisoned...how harsh!

Utpal said...

Yes but sadly it is the reality.

Nature has created them for ground and we have brought them in pots.

"I"ness always overshadows "One"ness

J C said...

Oh yes, potted prison. Put it in the ground and let it dance free. Love your haiku.

gma said...

I enjoy potted plants and have never considered
that they may be prisoners. But I think you are right!

Marit said...

"Dancing lillies".. it doesn't get much better. Lovely poem! Hug from Holland!

carol l mckenna said...

Hmm ~ well penned ~ not sure I agree about the 'imprisoned' ~ do get your meaning

Happy Creating ~ ^_^

Utpal said...

@J C, Thanks for your read and being absorbed with the meaning. I am humbled.

Utpal said...

@gma, Actually I conceived this looking after my plotted plants. I assumed what they would have said to me had they have been able to speak our language. And than I assumed what they are saying to me in their language :)

Thanks for your read and motivation.

Utpal said...

@Marit, I am humbled.

Utpal said...

@Carol, Thanks for your read and such valuable comment.

Just another take, I feel I am imprisoned in my body with the laws of society and lands :)

rebecca said...

purest beauty.
thank you for the inspiration, so glad you are here sharing your haiku!

Utpal said...

Rebecca, It feels highly motivating with such good words.

Thanks for appreciation.

Ramesh Sood said...

A growth imprisoned..ah, I was perhaps among such people.. for years stayed stuck happy with such growth..

RS

Utpal said...

Ah Ramesh, I could understand. In fact most of us do remain more with external world than internal.
Thanks for your read.